Case 01 · Undergraduate
Five choices, two of them unreachable
At the start: BBB predicted, a choice list built from a league table, statement opening with a childhood anecdote.
What we did: rebuilt the shortlist around tariff points and contextual offers, found two courses with foundation-year entry, restructured the statement around a Year 12 work placement.
Then: three offers, including one above the original predicted grades on a contextual basis.
Case 02 · Postgraduate
A proposal with no method section
At the start: a strong 2:1 in economics, an interesting question about freight pricing, and eight pages that were all literature.
What we did: eight weeks on research methods, cut the proposal to two pages, identified four possible supervisors and drafted the approach emails.
Then: two supervisors responded, one interview, MRes offer with a route to transfer to PhD.
Case 03 · Institution
Two modules, one rubric problem
At the start: a provider validating two Level 5 modules, with assessment criteria that repeated the learning outcomes back at students.
What we did: moderated a 40-script sample, rewrote the rubric bands against the outcomes, trained four markers over a half day.
Then: validation passed without conditions and marker disagreement on the next cohort fell noticeably.